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citrine9999

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Thuộc nhà: Amber
Tên bài dự thi: "Mom is my idol "
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citrine9999

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My mother

Mom is my idol.
She always cares for me and every member of family. My mother has supported me, given me necessary criticism, and taught me a great deal about how to live my life.
I love my mom the most.

citrine9999

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Mom is my idol - my first teacher.

Mom is my idol - my first teacher.
My mother taught me first of all how to read and write. She taught me good manners. She has supported me, given me necessary criticism, and taught me a great deal about how to live my life.
Mother has to do a lot of work. But she was never says  tired.
My mother is an excellent cook. She takes good care of me, my father,  brother and all other guests who come to our house.
I am really proud of my mother.  We are really very fortunate to have her.

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