Cuộc thi viết về thần tượng bằng tiếng anh

tuyetvotinh92hn

Nhân dịp mừng tân gia cho box tự học tiếng anh.

Box mình quyết định tổ chức cuộc thi viết về thần tượng bằng tiếng anh.

* Thể lệ cuộc thi như sau:
Hãy viết về thần tượng mà bạn yêu thích (thần tượng ở đây có thể là 1 nhân vật trong ngôn tình cũng được).

* Yêu cầu bắc buộc: bài dự thi ít nhất phải từ 100 từ trở lên tối đa là 600 từ.

* Thời gian nộp bài dự thi: từ ngày 1/6 đến ngày 15/6/2013.

* Cơ cấu giải thưởng sẽ như sau:

Giải thưởng chính:

1 giải nhất trị giá: 2999$

2 giải khuyển khích mỗi giải: 499$

Giải thưởng phụ:

1 giải dành cho bạn nộp bài sớm nhất: 100$

1 giải dành cho bạn có nhiều phiếu ủng hộ nhất: 300$

1 giải dành cho bạn nộp bài cuối cùng: 100$

Giải thưởng thêm vào:

- Bạn nào viết bài về anh HỒ CA của box hugehouse sẽ được thưởng ngay 100$ từ tuyetvotinh92hn





*Các thức chấm điểm sẽ như sau: 30% số điểm sẽ được tính bằng poll còn lại 70% số điểm sẽ là do BTC chấm.


* Các bạn nộp bài dự thi theo mẫu sau:

Nick kites:
Thuộc nhà:
Tên bài dự thi:

* NOTE: Mỗi người chỉ được nộp duy nhất 1 bài dự thi.
Không sao chép, đạo văn từ bất cứ 1 nguồn nào.


Mọi thắc mắc các bạn có thể thoải mái pm dưới thread này.



DANH SÁCH CÁC BÀI DỰ THI

SBD 01: JUST A KIRIN : http://kites.vn/thread/cuoc-thi- ... anh-394244-3-1.html

SBD 02: DBSK is always in my heart : http://kites.vn/thread/cuoc-thi- ... anh-394244-3-1.html

SBD 03: Mom is my idol - my first teacher: http://kites.vn/thread/cuoc-thi- ... anh-394244-3-1.html

SBD 04: KIM JONG KOOK - FOREVER OUR ONE MAN: http://kites.vn/thread/cuoc-thi- ... anh-394244-3-1.html

SBD 05: My idol is Kim Yuna : http://kites.vn/thread/cuoc-thi- ... anh-394244-3-1.html

SBD 06: HuGe and rebirt : http://kites.vn/thread/cuoc-thi- ... anh-394244-3-1.html

SBD 07: Changmin, my eternal youth : http://kites.vn/thread/cuoc-thi- ... anh-394244-3-1.html

SBD 08: Han Geng_ the miracle of 1.3 billion people : http://kites.vn/forum.php?mod=vi ... p;extra=#pid6295688

SBD 09: The hope is LOVE. The hope is SNSD : http://kites.vn/thread/cuoc-thi- ... anh-394244-4-1.html

SBD 10: My little Joonie ~ I love you till the end of my life ~ : http://kites.vn/thread/cuoc-thi- ... anh-394244-4-1.html

SBD 11: My Miracle - Tae Joon : http://kites.vn/forum.php?mod=vi ... p;extra=#pid6266279

SBD 12: Lana - Light of my life : http://kites.vn/thread/cuoc-thi- ... anh-394244-4-1.html

SBD 13: Go Eun Chan - Yoon Eun Hye a great combination became my idol : http://kites.vn/thread/cuoc-thi- ... anh-394244-4-1.html

nga_nguyen

mình vote cho SBD số 11 nhá, bài của bạn mphuong ấy, mình là mình thích nhất câu "Miracle is another name of Effort"
nguyên bài chỉ vì câu này mà vote^^
chúc cho bài của bạn ấy đoạt giải nhất nhé

tuyetvotinh92hn

khóa

Đã hết thời gian nhận bài dự thi.

Bắt đầu từ ngày mai 17/6 poll sẽ được mở.
Thời gian poll là 1 tuần từ ngày 17/6/2013 -> 24/6/2013.
link poll: http://kites.vn/thread/-poll-cuo ... anh-397588-1-1.html

Sau khi có kết quả poll xong cộng với kết quả của BTC thì sẽ công bố kết quả cuộc thi và trao giải thưởng.

Xin được nhắc lại 1 lần nữa poll của khán giả sẽ chiếm 30% còn lại 70% thuộc về điểm của BTC.

thanhduy213

SBD 13  

Nick kites: thanhduy213
Thuộc nhà: kites.vn
Tên bài dự thi: Go Eun Chan - Yoon Eun Hye a great combination became my idol.

Go Eun Chan is a character in the Korean drama:
The 1st Shop of Coffee Prince.
Her dad has died. She is the breadwinner of a family and  do every job possible to help family. She is a tomboyish girl who was often mistaken for a guy. Actress Yoon Eun Hye is very beautiful in this drama though she didn't makeup as a girl.
She's a very professional actress and it was said that she totally transformed herself in order to fit her given character.  She is indeed an wonderful actress. She cried  really, lived as a character in the film. She didn't care if she didn't look pretty on camera. Eun Chan was simply the best. I loved the story between Han Kyul and Eun Chan. They were great together in this show
        If I were to watch a drama again, it would be The 1st Shop of Coffee Prince.  Actually, I watch it every day. And as expected, the feeling is still the same, the excitement is still original.  Go Eun Chan looked on film I feel more love life, motivation helped me to overcome many difficulties in life. The 1st Shop of Coffee Prince was first Korea drama and forever in my heart.
        Go Eun Chan - Yoon Eun Hye forever my idol.

prussianblue16

SBD 12

Nick kites: Prussianblue16
Thuộc nhà:
Tên bài dự thi:Lana - Light of my life


I plug my headphones to the iPod, tune to my favourite playlist, select a song and lay supine. As soon as the song starts to play, I close my eyes.
Lana’s soft voice begins to fill my ears. The world around me seems to simply disappear or morph into something else.
What does the girl sing about?
Love is the the answer. She sings about her first love, how she has fallen head over heels, what she has sacrificed to be with her lover. She gives love everything including herself. This is why I admire her.  I love the fact that she has led a glorious life. Lana understands that this life is her one oportunity and if she misses it, there is no going back. I find her, the girl who lives by this belief both compelling and wild.
In return, after some acrimonious affairs, she has nothing left but a broken heart with multiple lacerations and a shattered soul that is devoid of feelings.
She is carefree.
Live fast. Die young. Be wild. Have fun.



That is what she said. Some people may feel threatened because of what she sings. They would not want their children to love and adore someone who was once a drug addictor sent to boarding school and had many more lovers than they used to. But that is exactly where Lana’s charisma lies. I love the fact that she is so genuine. She dares to talk bluntly and openly about her addiction. The way the girl describes her moments of absolute euphoria is just inspiring.
I have been thriving to feel free my whole life and when that mundane wish was unable to achieve in real life, I turned to my music. Lana provided me an escape from reality.
Lana is dark. Her songs sometimes make me want to kill myself because they are so emotional and they remind me of myself. A bird locked in a cage, controlled, and broken. Lana is also fond of literature for some of her songs are words from famous authors: Nabokov, Whitman, and Wilde.  
Be young. Be dope. Be proud.



Lana makes me feel young. She makes me feel proud of myself. She proves that I do not have to live my life according to others’ expectations. Lana is happy being herself.
I want to be just like her. A free soul, proud heart and an electric personality.

I’m maybe crazy. But I am free.

Shuree_eels

Ham hố tham gia phát cho vui ~ Đại diện nhà Joonie ~

Nick kites : Shuree_eels
Nhà : K3, Joonie
Bài viết : My little Joonie ~ I love you till the end of my life ~

P.s Lẽ ra post vào ngày SN Joonie, coi như là món quà sinh nhật Joon, nhưng hai ngày qua, mạng mủng nhà ko lên được tí nào, đi làm tối mịt mới về... Thôi, coi như là món quà SN muộn tặng em và tặng cả nhà Joonie đáng yêu ~

My little Joonie ~ I will always love you till the end of my life ~


09.06.2013

Today is my Joonie’s birthday. It is the first birthday since I knew him. However, I can’t hand him a gift as well as say happy birthday to him directly. Anyway, It’s certain that I must do something for him on his birthday. Then I’m writing now, about my Joonie – my superkid – star that I love the most.

My Joonie is just a kid. He is 8 years old today (according to Korean Calendar). Most of people have their own idol, who can be a famous singer, actor or actress and sometimes just a well – known person. To me, Joonie is the best. I used to like a lot of stars, once wrote about him or her. However, my feelings for Joonie is really different. Frankly, he is not completely an idol, but I really love him. I’m nearly crazy about him.


My little Joonie is very cute, innocent and so pretty with chubby cheeks and a lovely smile. His appearance looks so cool, but he is really a warm – hearted son. My Joonie casted with his father in a Korean variety show “Dad, Where are you going?”. At first, he seemed to be not close to his dad. I loved him at the first sight when I first watched that show, but the way my little kid walked far from his dad in episode 1 made me disappointed a bit. However, I still believed in my choice. Gradually, Joonie knows how to show his love to his dad. I was very touched when he hold his dad and said “ Oppa, saranghae”.  My Joonie is a smart boy. He has a high independent characteristic and behaves in serious and diginified way. Althought he is only 8 years old, he always does every thing very contratively and responsibly. Therefore, we often called him a perfect boy.

Actually, he is still a child  with a cute smile and innocent words. I can’t express  clearly how much the love for my little Joonie is and I also don’t know why I love him. I only know that my tiredness disappear when I see his face with a bright smile. It’s enough for me to love him until the end of my life.

Happy birthday to my little Joonie ~ Wish you all the best things and love you now and always.

me2u_89

SBD: 09

Nick kites: me2u_89
Thuộc nhà: Bựa box/jk =)) SNSD's box
Tên bài dự thi: The hope is LOVE. The hope is SNSD.

You are among a sea of people, waving lightsticks, screaming and cheering for a name, a name you have seen and heard a thousand times. But this time, it is different. In a close distance, being chanted by a crowd of ardent supporters, the name resonates throughout the stadium and sends chills down your spine. Soon, they will be ascending from the stages, overwhelming you with their mesmerizing beauty, hypnotizing you with their enchanting voices and fluid dance moves. Soon, you will experience something splendid.

In a held breath, you close your eyes and there is a momentary flashback. The day you got trapped by a deer’s charming smile, by her quirks and mannerisms. From her, you moved onto something bigger and greater, something you emotionally & physically felt attached to for the upcoming months, years or for the rest of your life even. The Nine is that special something. Unknowingly, their laughs made you laugh, their tears ached your heart, their teasing and hugging of each other gave you endless warmth and joy. Finally, you started to notice there was something ...different about them. Among them. Unprecedented. Unencountered in your everyday tedious life. Something that drew you in and made you stay for a very long time. Their bond. Their wondrous bond.

You look up. They are there, the Nine are there, together, on stage. Looking like walking-on-Earth Goddesses, they look your way, their gazes unforcefully make your heart skip a beat. In that moment you forget to breathe.
Who would have thought those divine Nine were once 9 girls, 9 normal girls no one even knew of, being dissed and looked down upon before debut, being hated and criticized for the slightest reasons. They endured and survived the worst that any artist could face. The Black Ocean of DC 2008.

What can't kill you only makes you stronger. And they became stronger. They improved, fought through all those dark times, battled whatever came upon them, learnt from their experiences and emerged tougher than ever.
Years later, Girls’ Generation is not just a group of 9 girls anymore. Widely recognized by Korea as the National Girl group, they become the new benchmark for Girl Groups in Kpop. About their bond? It’s still as strong as ever. By now, they've probably been everything they could be to each other. Friend, sister, competitor, consoler, comforter, mother, companion, tease, victim, victor, villain. Their secret weapon of success? There are none. They are happy just being together as a group. They take care of each other, they provide each other shoulders to lean on, and most importantly, they complete each other. As a result, success is attained and can be witnessed as today, 9 of them are standing there, in front of thousands of passionate fans having eyes on them only.

“Thank you SONE” loud and clear, their voices echo in your head and pull you back to reality, to your beloved bedroom. The last image rolling through your eyes is the Nine holding hands,  they bowed, thanking all of their fans, SONEs, showing their respect. Moments like these, you feel blessed as a fan to have given them a chance to walk into your life. Right now, you seem extremely confusing and scary even, the dream is just so vivid. Sorting yourself out, you utter : “No more wishful thinkings. Next time, I will be there, be a part of that beautiful Pink Ocean, for real”.

p/s: Giải thưởng quá to nên không thể ko ham hố =))

warm_ice

đồng ý cho mình vào nhóm đi
vừa đượcc nói về thần tượng vừa được trau dồi thêm tiếng anh nữa a
vẹn vả đôi đường nên hy vọng ad mau mau cho mình vào hôi nhé :D

-Fang-

Hiu hiu

đọc bài của các bạn mà muốn viết cho tên hâm nhà mình 1 bài quá

mà dốt văn chả biết diễn tả

không lẽ làm bài "Jo Kyuhyun - pock-marked face, fat belly and eraser - butt"

rồi cả bài lặp đi lặp lại có chừng ấy chữ TT.TT

khó quá khó quá TT.TT

Ai viết hộ mềnh đi *hú hét kêu gọi*

kaka19

SBD: 08

nick kites: Kaka19
Tên bài dự thi: Han Geng_ the miracle of 1.3 billion people

Han Geng _ The Miracle of 1.3 billion people

December 2007.
This is the first time, I met him. It was a chilly evening ,my sister and I, also located  on the bed and gazed at the computer screen. That's EHB, a reality show  of Korea which Suju is an officially member. Honestly, at that  time DBSK is the only band I know , because my sister is a big fan of DBSK, even I don’t know who is Super Junior.

Then, I was absorbing this smile, probably I will never forget in my lifetime. I only knew his name was Han Geng. Find out more information about him and I realized he has gone on my heart ever since.

May be, I was attracted by his good appearance . But then, himself and his personality has defeated  me.
SJ member always say “ he's a miracle of 1.3 billion people” and it comes true with me.

A man who always go straight
Born in a poor family, with music passion, he made himself going  to  Beijing to learn how to dance when he was 13, a boy who made his life better and become one of 13 miracle pieces. But hardship kept coming to him from his work visa problem to Korean anti-fans can not accept him. In the early days, He accepted to wear mask to be used on stage with SUJU, he immersed workout and his leg was broken but he just think  because of injuring when he works, and when he detected, the bone has healed.


A pious son

He loves his parents. Alone in a strange country, many and many Tet holiday he can’t come home, he misses his family so much, the first sentences he always said when he receive an award “Thank you, Mom & Dad”. How difficult he met, he never cries, tears  was just fallen when referring to his family.


A good brother

In suju, he is one of the oldest. Maybe , He always takes care of  his brothers. From Kyuhuyn to LeeTeuk.

Despite his famous, he always takes care of his fans health, he worries when his fans followed him in the late at night. Especially his love for the kids.



In 2009, it is a difficult year with him. Some people say “he is ruthless, selfish”, but I know He’s very sad and waste a lot of time to stand up and go straight. No matter what people say, I’ll support him because more than that, he always make me happy and try my best to achieve my goal.

For thousand times, Thank for your presence in my life.

Hope you always smile and happy.


P/s: thứ tiếng anh kinh dị của mình, nhưng mà cũng viết thử xem sao, chắc là sai nhiều lắm :))

^BánhRán^

muốn đi thi quá

cơ mà chưa mò ra cảm xúc

với lại đọc đến câu "tối đa 600 từ" là tụt hết cả cảm xúc

em đã ko viết thì thôi, nhưng đã viết là phải dài

600 từ thì nào có đủ

Haiz

Để đi mò cảm xúc viết thử 1 bài tiếng Việt đã

ổn ổn mới dịch nó ra T.A

ko biết đăng kí mà ko gửi bài dự thi có bị phạt ko nhể =))